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In Lieu

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The quickening breath
The thumping heart
Tender limbs creath
Logic and reasoning depart

The sweating skin
Smiles ensue
Feelings of chagrin
Metamorphoses to sough

Undeniable thought
Longing of touch
Mind fraught
Freedom from hutch

Fear of recognition
Worries of future
Chance of no fruition
Departing weak suture

Hoping for change
Luck to renew
Possibly derange
Luck askew

The last time
Will in lieu
To the sublime
The rest is up to you
It's been a mega-long time since I've written any poetry, so I decided to write this out as I can't currently sleep.
If you find any meaning, logic or positivity in this, awesome. Glad you enjoyed it. ^.^
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fangnclaw864's avatar
The repetition and fluidity of this piece makes for quite an enjoyable read; it is wonderful! ^^